Today Alex wrote a poem about rain. We were learning about imagery writing. Have a read of it!
Rain
The monstrous clouds take over the sky,
With bowling ball sized hail and rain.
I hear the rain clip clopping into the Olympic sized puddles.
I see nothing because the thick misty fogg,
Blocks my vision.
I feel cold hard lightning bolts scratching my back,
As I walk through the mist!
Rain gives me the creeps!
By Alex.
Room 15
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Thursday, 22 August 2013
My poem
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Great poem Alex! Kylee
ReplyDeleteAlex the poem is great.
ReplyDeleteLauren S.